Let's just decide not to discuss how terrible Dan's outfit is.

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Kohikki, May 5th, 2011, 11:50 pm

- So I quit my job this week.
Got more free time now.
So hopefully my ridiculous not updating nonsense will be put to rest, at least until I have another job to eat up all my time.

Thanks for your patience, guys.
It means the world to me.

I hope you enjoy! Thanks for reading!

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Kohikki, May 10th, 2011, 11:51 pm

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@P!K: Oh hey, when'd you change your avi?! It's cute!
XD I'm glad you think so, I thought the outfit was bad, Haha. Aww, you're so sweet. And I hope I can too! =)

@ Mildtarantula: Oh thank you! I'm glad! :) Haha, I'm happy people like their greetings. I think those are good nicknames that pretty much sum each other up. And I'm especially glad that the knocks look okay because I am honestly not too sure of myself when it comes to writing sound effects and what not.

@Zhai: Thanks! Scared Lily is fun to draw! I don't get to do it often. ;D

@Ang: He is magic like that.

@Iron: I hope so. :) Awww, thank you! That means so much because perspective is something I'm working very hard to teach myself. ;D

@Foofy: :) Thanks, man! Hahah, It's funny that folks enjoy their little interaction there so much because it wasn't even in the original script for it.

@Tallinn: Thank you!

@loserfish: Ha, it's okay, I got some good cash out of it while I was sticking with it. And I definitely am happier now. Thank you so much! :)

@MoonRuby: 3 locks! He locked them all! Indeed, they always forget about the windows. And thank you!

@mananabiscuit: :D He does sort of seem like he's hitting on her, hahaha. It's his incredibly open posture, I bet. ;D I'm sure Dan would welcome hugs and lending out clothes.

@StellaCadente: Her surprised face is fun to draw! Even if it's only half! I'm glad you like it! Haha, I'm not back at the normal pace yet, but I will definitely be striving to get back there. And thanks! I hope so too!

@eishiya: Ahhhh, okay! Thank you for explaining that to me! I'm not very good at light sources, hahah. Except when I really focus really hard on them. I think I see more spots where there is pillow shading, I'll try to avoid it in the future. :)

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I think panel 3 might look more surreal than it probably should. And you've got pillow shading going on.

He's hitting on her without even trying. A+

I'm glad you've got time to work on comics now, but I hope joblessness doesn't last too long D:! Monnneeey.

posted by eishiya on May 6th, 2011, 12:28 am





 

It might, I don't know. It's pretty much... how I intended it, I think.
Haha, I really don't know. :D At this point there's not much I can do about it though. I guess when I redraw pages and stuff some time in the future it's something I can fix.

And I don't really know what pillow shading is but from a quick google I think I fixed a little(?) of it. Maybe. I hope. Thanks for letting me know. :)

Oh and also, I should be good for a little while, I don't spend much so I have enough saved to buy me some downtime.

posted by Kohikki on May 6th, 2011, 12:46 am





 

that bottom panel might contain the most beautiful greeting in all of comics history XD i actually really like panel 3, especially the way you've written the knocks. makes it more interesting than just a flat door.

posted by mildtarantula on May 6th, 2011, 5:59 am





 

Lily is totally cute in panel 5 xD

posted by Zhai on May 6th, 2011, 10:47 am



 

Dan looks pretty good for a guy who just got woken up in the middle of the night and had to go save his friend from an adorable little British girl.

Good show, my good man.

posted by Angel (Guest) on May 6th, 2011, 1:25 pm





 

Hopefully you'll get better job than the previous one : )

I especially enjoy 2nd and 5th panel =) Is it me, or are you getting better with perspective =3?

posted by Iron on May 6th, 2011, 2:21 pm



 

I concur with Iron, you have gotten better at perspective.

The dialogue in the last panel is among your best, and I like the poses of the characters.

Keep up the good work!

posted by Foolio (Guest) on May 6th, 2011, 2:55 pm



 

Nice introductions XD

posted by Tallinn on May 6th, 2011, 5:06 pm





 

I'm sorry you got a job that was aweful enough that you just couldn't take anymore D: but, I'm glad that you're probably happier now, at least! AND YES, UPDATESSSS. And awe man, everything about this page seems beautiful and artistic, to me. You're typography is lookin' real nice S:P.

AND FFFF- like everyone else, I think that introduction is marvelous <3333

posted by loserfish on May 6th, 2011, 5:23 pm



  Cool Door

That's quite a few locks too bad he forgot about window.

Great Story by the way

posted by MoonRuby (Guest) on May 6th, 2011, 8:09 pm





 

hahaha the whole 'hitting on her without even trying' thing is pretty cool xD I like that pose bahahahha and he looks so tired too, looooooool XD bahahahhaa I want to hug him
I like Dan's outfit! D: I want to wear it 8D
OOOOOOOOOOH DOWNSTAIRS GUY, I GEDDIT, AHAHAHA yes thats so good xD!!

posted by mananabiscuit on May 6th, 2011, 11:43 pm





 

Love Lil's face in the second last panel!
Good UR back to the normal pace. It's weird to say but good U quit that job since it was such a terrible one! I wish U get a new one, and a good one, soon ^^

posted by StellaCadente on May 8th, 2011, 11:08 am





 

Herp late reply.
I didn't mean that the door panel is a bad one. I like it! But with the shading and angle, it drew attention to itself, probably more than it should story-wise.

By pillow shading, I just mean you've got shading on both sides of the door. That only happens with multiple light sources, which is very possible (even likely) in an average flat. But if you have multiple light sources, then those shadows would probably not be so deep.

posted by eishiya on May 9th, 2011, 8:30 pm





 

hahaha I just thought about somthing. Chris mighta been lying HAHA, no its my friend go answer the door, CUFF HER BOYS, noooooooooooooo you don't understand I'm tryiiing to heeeEeeeEeeeEeelllllllp!!!

posted by mananabiscuit on May 21st, 2011, 4:57 am



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