Yeah, well, I bet your dreams aren't anything too amazing either, girlie.

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Kohikki, August 31st, 2010, 8:08 pm

- No black and white version this time! Sorry.
The colouring didn't take very long.

So instead of compliments, maybe you guys could give me some critique on where to improve this time around?
Heh, compliments are fine too though.
I've basically been trying to get as much critique as possible so I can figure out just what I need to fix in order to make this the best I can.

Thanks for reading, everyone!!

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  TBQH

This is prrrobbbaaabblyyy one of my favorite pages to date. You set it up really well, and the coloring works nicely with it too. I like how things go outside of the boxes, and how many small details are inside them as well if you just look--in other words, I can't think of a critique for this page, haha.

Sucky friend is sucky, I'll try harder next time. D: But I lahv this page, babe, I lahv it a lot. <333

posted by MYVBXRS on August 31st, 2010, 8:19 pm





 

ENDLESS FIELD. ;____; <333
(Are the dreams in this comic based on that whole dream symbolism thing? CAUSE IF IT IS I AM SOO GUNNA GO LOOK IT UP XD)

I REALLY love the coloring in this page!! ;w; And that the skin shading has texture. <3

Critique? UHHHH.... I can't think of any. Maybe....in the third panel the bg should get lighter as it recedes into the back? Or darker? (Hell if I know, I suck at bgs. XDD;; ) UH. I ACTUALLY HAVE NO IDEA. IT LOOKS AMAZING THE WAY IT IS, IM JUST A LOSER WHO DOESNT KNOW WHAT THEY ARE TALKING ABOUT BUT WANTS TO HELP, DONT LISTEN TO ME. XDDDD

(This page is amazing as always, btw. ;w; I LOVE PURPLE SKIES FFFFF----) <333333333

posted by Qwchestr on August 31st, 2010, 8:29 pm





 

D'AWWW NO, I LOVE YOUR COMMENTS, GUYS.

@Qwchestr: THIS COMMENT LITERALLY MADE ME GIGGLE AND I'M NOT GOING TO DENY IT. YOU ARE SO NICE TO ME I DON'T EVEN. YOU SO KNOW WHAT YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT, AND I APPRECIATE YOU TRYING TO HELP SO MUCH. &#9829;&#9829;

@BOXERS: I AM GLAD YOU LIKE THIS PAGE. ;_; YOU'RE NOT A CRAPPY FRIEND.

@boldwager: Aw thanks! I'm glad you like it.

posted by Kohikki on August 31st, 2010, 8:44 pm



 

The coloring in this is so beautiful! It really makes it feel like they're in a dream and, man. I can't really critique (sorry!) because I really love the way you art.

posted by boldwager on August 31st, 2010, 9:56 pm





 

I really really like the field for some reason....it's so lovely! And I really like the way you color dream world, it's lovely~!! <333 AND IT'S REALLY HARD TO FIND ANYTHING BAD IN THIS PAGE FFFF---I think since you've been trying so hard lately it's paying off. ;O; <333 ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL PAGE~!!!

posted by loserfish on September 1st, 2010, 11:44 am



  pretty

This page is really pretty.

posted by Mookie (Guest) on September 2nd, 2010, 9:06 pm





 

Missy, you shouldn't have randomly JUMPED in somebody's dream!

Oh I gonna love this comic &#9829;

posted by ryuumajin on September 6th, 2010, 3:32 am



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